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The bar chart and table compare five countries in terms of the percentage of families with high-speed internet access, and the change over two consecutive years, from 2001 to 2002.

The bar chart and table compare five countries in terms of the percentage of families with high-speed internet access, and the change over two consecutive years, from 2001 to 2002. It is clear that the percentage of families with high-speed internet connection was highest in South Korea and the USA during those years. In addition, the biggest change in the number of families with high-speed internet access occurred in Britain. In 2001, about 11. 2% of South Korean households had access to high-speed internet, compared to 9. 3% of US families. One year later, the number of US families with high-speed internet soared by 170% to reach 25. 11% of the population, which was the highest figure of all measured countries for those years. By contrast, the growth rate was significantly lower in South Korea, at only 20%. High-speed internet was not as common in Germany, Switzerland and Britain, with only roughly 0. 35% of households having a high-speed connection. All three countries saw significant increases over the year, with Germany and Switzerland witnessing increases of 80% and 120% respectively. Meanwhile, Britain saw the biggest growth rate in high-speed internet connections with a 230% increase.
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in the number of
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internet access occurred in Britain.

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internet, compared to 9. 3% of US
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internet soared by 170% to reach 25. 11% of the population, which was the highest figure of all measured countries for those years. By contrast, the growth rate was
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20%. High-speed
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roughly 0. 35% of households having a
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connection. All three countries
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internet connections with a 230% increase.
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IELTS academic The bar chart and table compare five countries in terms of the percentage of families with high-speed internet access, and the change over two consecutive years, from 2001 to 2002.

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