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Percentage of people who ate five portions per day

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This chart shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruits and vegetables per day in the United Kingdom. The survey was set from 2001 to 2008. The survey started from 2001, when 10% to 15% children, 15% to 20% men and around 20% to 25% of women had 5 portions of a full day work. With gradual passing of the year, the percentage started increasing to the point, where in 2006, the peak for women was registered. The same can be said for the statistics showing men. The results given around 2006 and 2007, have men competing with the same percentage. The percentage of children, however, was the highest in 2007. By the end of 2008, men constituted 25% to 30% of the survey for getting full 5 meals a day. In case of women, it is around 30% and around 20% to 25% of children eat in 2008.
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20% to 25% of children eat in 2008.
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IELTS academic Percentage of people who ate five portions per day

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