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Bar chart of games played during 2000 to 2006

Bar chart of games played during 2000 to 2006 9DPj

The char illustrates worldwide sales of four types of modern games from 2000 to 2006. Units are measured in billion and dollars. Overall, in the year 2000, only Console games and Handheld games were available; later on, in 2001, mobile phone games and 2002 online games were introduced. Hand games' sales are increasing sharply, where sales of the other three types of games increase steadily. In terms of Online games, it sold out below one billion in the year 2001, and then its sells rate increased progressively like in 2002 sells were close to one billion. In the year 2003, 2004, 2005 were approximately three billion, nearly four billion and under six billion sequentially and in 2006 it witnesses the highest sell slightly above six billion. On the other hand, Handheld games have considered the most sell of all three games. In the year 2001 started its journey with under twelve billion sells, it touches twelve billion margins in next year, in 2002 sells increase into thirteen billion, and in the year 2004 sells were around fifteen, billion where the year 2005 sell remained the same. In 2006 sells were jumped to eighteen billion. In addition to Console games, they face a sell decline over the period. In 2000 it had sold around six billion, unfortunately in 2001 sells of Console games decrease and turn to below six billion, then sells go down to five billion in 2002 and finally in 2006 total sells collapse to near three billion.

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