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Information and prediction of the changes in percentage of population aged 65 and above in three countries

Information and prediction of the changes in percentage of population aged 65 and above in three countries QdyP

The given table illustrates the rate of population in the past and future years of older people from 65 and more, within Canada, Germany and UK. Overall, not only Germany elderly people percentage remains at the peak during all years, but also, the predictions for coming future sees a dramatic hype. In 1988, Germany population was highest at 20. 45% compared to Canada at 16. 32% and UK with 14. 23%. Whereas, in 2000 a drastic change can be seen in rise of population in Germany (25. 32%) along side Canada (20. 67%), while UK still at the lowest (14. 89%). Future prediction for all three countries can increase at a rapid rate with Germany older public population rising upto (30. 42%), Canada (26. 35%) with UK (20. 35%).

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 Canada (20. 67%), while UK still
 at the lowest (14. 89%).

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 (30. 42%), Canada (26. 35%) with UK (20. 35%). 