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The maps give information about the comparison between Paradise island in the past and at the present

The maps give information about the comparison between Paradise island in the past and at the present PWkoK

The maps give information about the comparison between Paradise island in the past and at the present. Overall, it can clearly be seen that natural doesn’t have much construction. After that a lot of infrastructures are built to serve tourism. As can be seen from the map, in the past natural spring was located in the North East which was close the Rocks. In the middle of the island, there was the forest which was close the Scientific Research Station. Next to the Scientific Research Station was the pier which was located in the South West. The beach was located in the North West of the island. It is worth noticing that nowadays Scenic Lookout is near the Rocks. The forest is replaced by restaurant, BBQ Area and Cafe. The Scientific Research Station has been replaced by Hotel Complex and Swimming pool. The island is surrounded by the cycle path and connects all facilities. The Pier is expanded and has the Cruise ship. The beach is opened for tourists.

The maps give information about the comparison between If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.Paradise Island
Paradise island
 in the past and at the present.

Overall
, it can clearly
 be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that natural doesn’t have much construction. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 that This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 infrastructures are built
 to serve tourism.

As can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 from the map, in the past natural spring was located
 in the North East which was close the Rocks. In the middle of the island, there was the forest which was close the Scientific Research Station. Next
 to the Scientific Research Station was the pier which was located
 in the South West. The beach was located
 in the North West of the island.

It is worth noticing that nowadays Scenic Lookout is near the Rocks. The forest is replaced
 by restaurant, BBQ Area and 'Cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"Café
Cafe
. The Scientific Research Station has been replaced
 by Hotel Complex and Swimming pool. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 island is surrounded
 by the cycle path and connects all facilities. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 Pier is expanded
 and has the Cruise ship. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 beach is opened
 for tourists. 