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The flowchart shows how fruit is canned

The flowchart shows how fruit is canned rYb3L

The flow chart shows the canning process for fruit. There are fourteen stages in the fruit canning process from when the fresh fruit is picked to when the canned fruit is distributed. Most stages in the process are done by machine, althought the picking and quality control are done by hand. First the fruit is picked by hand and transported by truck to the cannery. In the cannery, first it is washed, then it is checked for quality and any bad or poor quality food is removed. Then, the fruit is stored at a cool temperature. Next the fruit is weighed and graded, then it is peeled, cored and sliced. After that, she sliced fruit is put into cans which are then sealed. The canned fruit is cooked and at this stage the cans are also sterilized. After cooking and sterilizing, the cans are labelled and the canned fruit is stored before being dispatched to distributors and other places to be sold.

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 the canning process for fruit.

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fruit
 canning process from when the fresh You use this word too often, consider replacing it withproductnutcropproducegrainberry
fruit
is picked
 to when the canned You use this word too often, consider replacing it withproductnutcropproducegrainberry
fruit
is distributed
. Most stages in the process are done
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althought
 the picking and quality control are done
 by hand.

First
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withproductnutcropproducegrainberry
fruit
is picked
 by hand and transported by truck to the cannery. In the cannery, first
 it is washed
, then it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitored
checked
 for quality and any This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 or poor quality food is removed
. Then, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withproductnutcropproducegrainberry
fruit
is stored
 at a cool temperature. Next
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withproductnutcropproducegrainberry
fruit
is weighed
 and graded, then it is peeled
, cored and sliced. After that, she sliced You use this word too often, consider replacing it withproductnutcropproducegrainberry
fruit
is put
 into cans which are then sealed. The canned You use this word too often, consider replacing it withproductnutcropproducegrainberry
fruit
is cooked
 and at this stage the cans are also
 sterilized. After cooking and sterilizing, the cans are labelled
 and the canned You use this word too often, consider replacing it withproductnutcropproducegrainberry
fruit
is stored
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before
being dispatched
 to distributors and other places to be sold
. 