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The results of a survey from five different Australian cities about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking.

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The chart presents the results of a survey from five different Australian cities about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking. From the chart we can see that Sydney is the highest city that bough fresh coffee in last 4 weeks at almost 44%, Hobart is the highest city that bought instant coffee in the last 4 weeks at around 55%, Melbourne was the first at going to a café for coffee or tea in last 4 weeks at approximately 64%. From the chart we can observe that Sydney came first at almost 44% then Melbourne, Hobart, Adelaide, then Brisbane at buying fresh coffee in last 4 weeks. regarding buying instant coffee in last 4 weeks Hobart was taking the lead at around 54%, Brisbane, Adelaide, Melbourne, then Sydney at 45%. As to going to a café for coffee or tea in last 4 weeks Melbourne, Hobart and Sydney were close to each other yet Melbourne took the first at approximately 64%. we conclude that the five Australian cities are close to each other regarding coffee and tea buying and drinking.
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Melbourne, Hobart and Sydney were close to each other
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IELTS academic The results of a survey from five different Australian cities about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking.

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