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The represented chart illustrates the unemployment circumstance of the countryside and urban areas in Australia in 2012 Overall, it appears that from the very beginning countryside arears started very well, where the urban areas enhanced later, while they started very badly.

The represented chart illustrates the unemployment circumstance of the countryside and urban areas in Australia in 2012 Overall, it appears that from the very beginning countryside arears started very well, where the urban areas enhanced later, while they started very badly. 8enG
The represented chart illustrates the unemployment circumstance of the countryside and urban areas in Australia in 2012 Overall, it appears that from the very beginning countryside arears started very well, where the urban areas enhanced later, while they started very badly. In terms of, the rural areas begin from 7 starting of the year, however, the next quarters like 2nd it decreased by 5 and then next quarters seems fluctuated respectively. The urban arears, had started very poorly where it showed a little over by 2 at the very beginning. Although it looks to touched the peak point in the 2nd quarter of the year and the ratio was increased by 4, in addition to, in the 3rd quarter the proportion raised down approximately 2, though it substantially grew in the next quarter of the year.
The represented chart illustrates the unemployment circumstance of the countryside and urban areas in Australia in 2012

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beginning countryside
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well, where the urban areas enhanced later, while they
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In terms of, the rural areas
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from 7 starting of the year,
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over by 2 at the
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beginning. Although it looks
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the peak point in the 2nd
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of the year and the ratio
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the proportion raised down approximately 2, though it
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IELTS academic The represented chart illustrates the unemployment circumstance of the countryside and urban areas in Australia in 2012 Overall, it appears that from the very beginning countryside arears started very well, where the urban areas enhanced later, while they started very badly.

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