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The report will refer to two maps that show how the town changed after establishment of a hydroelectric power dam , in 2 decades since 1990 .

The report will refer to two maps that show how the town changed after establishment of a hydroelectric power dam, in 2 decades since 1990. 1AJEG
The report will refer to two maps that show how the town changed after establishment of a hydroelectric power dam, in 2 decades since 1990. Overall, it is clear that the length of the river became shorter by the extension of a huge lage. Furthermore, the forest and farmland had completely disappeared by 2010. In 1990, there was an ancient structure and rare plants and animals to the west of the river, next to those were forest and mountains. In the east of the river, there were irrigated farmlands and villages. By 2010, town had considerably changed, both of in western and easten of the river. In the west, the ancient structure and rare plants and animals were replaced by a huge lake, which also became the fishing area in 2010. The village in far easten was demolished and relocated in the southeast of the river and the large hotel was constructed in these place. In addition, a hydroelectric dam was added with a wide number of electricity that was nearby a river.
The report will refer to two maps that
show
how the town
changed
after establishment of a hydroelectric power dam, in 2 decades since 1990.

Overall
, it is
clear
that the length of the
river
became shorter by the extension of a huge
lage
.
Furthermore
, the forest and farmland had completely disappeared by 2010.

In 1990, there was an ancient structure and rare plants and animals to the west of the
river
,
next
to those were forest and mountains. In the east of the
river
, there
were irrigated
farmlands and villages.

By 2010, town had
considerably
changed
, both of in western and
easten
of the river.

In the west, the ancient structure and rare plants and animals
were replaced
by a huge lake, which
also
became the fishing area in 2010. The village in far
easten
was demolished
and relocated in the southeast of the
river
and the large hotel
was constructed
in these place.
In addition
, a hydroelectric dam was
added
with a wide number of electricity that was nearby a
river
.
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IELTS academic The report will refer to two maps that show how the town changed after establishment of a hydroelectric power dam, in 2 decades since 1990.

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  American English
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