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The report compares the statistics regarding the rate of boys and girls attendance for primary and secondary school across the world between 2000-2004, and reveals the changes in enrollment ratio between developed, industrialized and least developed countries over the period.

The report compares the statistics regarding the rate of boys and girls attendance for primary and secondary school across the world between 2000-2004, and reveals the changes in enrollment ratio between developed, industrialized and least developed countries over the period. Overall, net primary school enrollment of girl's in industralised countries across the world, was the highest, on the contrary these figures for enrollment in secondary school of girls in least developed countries remained the lowest.
The report compares the statistics regarding the rate of boys and girls attendance for primary and secondary school across the world between 2000-2004, and reveals the
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in enrollment ratio between developed, industrialized and least
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developed countries
over the period.

Overall
, net primary school enrollment of girl's in
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countries across the world, was the highest,
on the contrary
these figures for enrollment in secondary school of girls in least
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developed countries
remained the lowest.

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