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The chart details the length of different quality water in rivers in england

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The chart shows the details of the length of different quality water in rivers in England from 1993 to 2003. It is clear that good quality water in rivers was the highest trend in England, but on the other hand poor quality was the lowest water quality of English rivers. The chart gives information about good water quality that increased enormously from 1993 to 1998, the poor mater quality decreased sharply to 4. 5 km from 1993 to 1998. However the fair quality water reduced significantly from 12. 5 km to 10km in 1993 to 1998. The chart illustrated that good water quality climbed moderately from 1998 to 2003 and finally stopped in 21 km in 2003, while fair quality declined gradually from 10km to 9 km in 1998 to 2003, the graph shows that fair water quality decreased minimally from 4. 5 to 4km during 1998 to 2003.
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quality
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water
in rivers in England from 1993 to 2003.

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good
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quality
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in rivers was the highest trend in England,
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on the other hand
poor
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quality
was the lowest
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water
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quality
of English rivers.

The chart gives information about
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good
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water
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quality
that increased
enormously
from 1993 to 1998, the poor mater
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decreased
sharply
to 4. 5 km from 1993 to 1998.
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the
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fair
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quality
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water
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reduced
significantly
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10km
in 1993 to 1998.

The chart illustrated that
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good
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water
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climbed
moderately
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stopped
in 21 km in 2003, while
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fair
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quality
declined
gradually
from
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10km
to 9 km in 1998 to 2003, the graph
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that
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fair
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water
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decreased
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4km
during 1998 to 2003.

IELTS academic The chart details the length of different quality water in rivers in england

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