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The recent changes in the town of kimsville.

The recent changes in the town of kimsville. 1aOLA
The two maps illustrate the main changes which have taken place in the citiy of kimsville between the years 2002 and today. Overview, it can be seen that the kimsville has become a modern city, with far more software company and new train station. One interesting changes is that a new train station has been built in the direction of west. Another striking change is that the old cinema has been knocked down to make way for new pubs. The south west of the city uesd to be a grren area with ots of trees, but the trees have been cut down and a new football stadium has been constructed. There did not use to be a factory near the city centre, but last few years have seen the building of new software company in the east side. A notable change has been the conversion of the trees area into a new apartments in the eft hand side of the city centre. The shopping centre has not replaced.
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citiy
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kimsville
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. Overview, it can be
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kimsville
has become a modern city, with far more software
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company
and
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new
train station. One interesting
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changes
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new
train station has
been built
in the direction of west. Another striking
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change
is that the
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cinema has
been knocked
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pubs. The
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cut
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football stadium has
been constructed
. There did not
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,
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last few years have
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software
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in the east side. A notable
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change
has been the conversion of the
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apartments
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IELTS academic The recent changes in the town of kimsville.

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