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talk about your hobby, describe and give opinion about your hobby.

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sReading books is my cup of tea. I am addicted to reading books so much so there is a ton of people consider me that I am a bookaholic. And, I can read two books just for a week. Type of books that I like to read is numberless. Because whensoever I read books I will choose the book that is suitable for my feelings and emotions are then. The reason I am interested in reading books is because it gives me a ton of useful and noteworthy things. In addition, reading books helps me more intelligent and quick-quitted. So that I can take advantage of opportunity to improve and develop myself. i started this hobby when I was seven. I have looked up this hobby all by myself because at that time there is lots of talented and smart people around me. So I want to find and show my potential. This epoch is progressing ceaselessly. Lots of young people and sucessful people read books. So I find reading books never unfashionable and I think that I am still continue this hobby in the future.
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bookaholic
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two
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for a week. Type of
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that I like to
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is numberless.
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whensoever I
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I will choose the
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that is
suitable for my feelings and emotions are then. The reason I
am interested
in
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reading
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books
is
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because
it gives me a ton of useful and noteworthy things.
In addition
,
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reading
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books
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helps
me more intelligent and
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quick-quitted
.
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that I can take advantage of opportunity to
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improve
and develop myself.
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started
this hobby when I was seven. I have looked up this hobby all by myself
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because
at that time there is lots of talented and smart
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people
around me.
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So
I want to find and
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show
my potential. This epoch is progressing
ceaselessly
. Lots of young
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people
and
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sucessful
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people
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read
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books
.
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I find
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never unfashionable and I
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think
that I am
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continue
this hobby in the future.
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IELTS academic talk about your hobby, describe and give opinion about your hobby.

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
186 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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