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The provieded pie graph and bar graph depicts the information about the amount and types of water in the world, and aslo tell the use of water in three areas in three nation .the data has been calibroted in percentage.

The provieded pie graph and bar graph depicts the information about the amount and types of water in the world, and aslo tell the use of water in three areas in three nation. the data has been calibroted in percentage. pLq1d
To commence with, the total world water quantity is 97. 50% However, 2. 50 ratio of fresh water in the world. Moreover, underground ice 0. 90% little bit quantity on earth. on the other hand, on the planet renewable water percenta is 0. 30%. Meanwhile, the frozen water glaclers and permanent snows, area is 69. 80% in the globe. furthermore, use of water in the sphere diffrent types of nations firstly in egypt using the water of domestic use ratio is 10 %. moving further industy spent water is 9% in the same countrie. since, percentage is 40% of agriculture using of water in the egypt. for instance, secondly canada utilize of water from industry and domestic use ratio was 20 to 45%. the agriculture using of water percentage is 30%. allthough, the saudi arabia make use of water of agriculture percentage of 50%. overall, it is clearly seen that the percenta of agriculture from using the water ratio is 50%in saudi arabia. whceas, least percentage is 8% of the same nation.
To commence with, the total world
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quantity is 97. 50%
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in the world.
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percenta
is 0. 30%. Meanwhile, the frozen
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in the sphere
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of domestic
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is 10 %.
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spent
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is 9% in the same
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.
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since
,
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is 40% of
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using of
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.
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canada
utilize of
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from industry and domestic
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was 20 to 45%.
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the
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using of
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saudi arabia
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IELTS academic The provieded pie graph and bar graph depicts the information about the amount and types of water in the world, and aslo tell the use of water in three areas in three nation. the data has been calibroted in percentage.

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