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Line graph: The proportion of residents living in Australia from different regions

Line graph: The proportion of residents living in Australia from different regions eRBwO

The line graph illustrates figures for millions of residents from the UK, Asia, and other living in Australia between 1976 and 2011. Looking from an overall perspective, it clear that those from the UK and other regions in Australia experienced a steep decline, which compensated for with a rise among others, in particular, Asia. Total numbers also increased overall. Total numbers changed erratically thoughout the period given. Standing at approximately 23 million, it dropped at 19 million before undergoing a considerable increase. In the end of the period, it reached a peak of 25 million, Concerning the number of Asian people residing in Australia, there was a significant growth from roughly 6 million in 1976 to around 19 million in 2006 and it continued this upward trajectory with a final surge to 15 million in 2011. In stark contrast, the figures for the UK reridents saw a steady decline over the time. It stood at under 15 million, then fell to 5 million in 2011. Meanwhile, other displayed a more erratic trend. With initial figures at about 11 million in the beginning of the period, it decreased moderately to 9 million, rose damatically to approximately 14 million and dropped at roughly 13 million in 2011.

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 living in Australia between 1976 and 2011.

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 perspective, it Did you mean "clears"?clears
clear
 that those from the UK and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewalternativemore
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 regions in Australia experienced a steep decline, which compensated for with a rise among others, in particular
, Asia. Total numbers also
 increased overall
.

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 the period This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
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. Standing at approximately 23 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
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, it dropped at 19 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
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 of the period, it reached a peak of 25 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
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, Concerning the number of Asian This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
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 residing in Australia, there was a significant growth from roughly 6 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
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 in 1976 to around 19 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
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 in 2006 and it continued this upward trajectory with a final surge to 15 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
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 in 2011.

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 a steady decline over the time. It stood at under 15 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
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, then fell to 5 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
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 in 2011. Meanwhile, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewalternativemore
other
 displayed a more erratic trend. With initial figures at about 11 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
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 in the beginning of the period, it decreased moderately
 to 9 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
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, rose Possible spelling mistake found.dramatically
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 to approximately 14 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
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 and dropped at roughly 13 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
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 in 2011. 