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The line graph shows date about the number of wildlife animals which are Bears, Dolphins and Whales over a period of six years between 2017 and 2022

The line graph shows date about the number of wildlife animals which are Bears, Dolphins and Whales over a period of six years between 2017 and 2022 0E7X1
It is clear fron the graph that the population of Bears shows a steady but significant rise over the period, while the rate of Dolphins and whales exprienced downword trend. If we look at the information in more details, as regards Bears, the rate of Bear was about 10 in 2017. However its level increased steedily by 130 from 10 to nearly 140 between 2017 and 2021. The graph for Delphins, at the beginning of the period the most popular animal was Delphins. But there was a sharp decline in the number of them from 150 to only 5 during the half decade. Also level of whales flactueted between 80 and 100 during the whole period of time which shown on line graph. Predictions shows that the Bears rate will continue to increase and reach the highest population 10 to 180 while whales will fall down to 70 and Delphins totaly will extinct in 2022.
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a steady
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significant rise over the period, while the rate of Dolphins and whales
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was about 10 in 2017.
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between 80 and 100 during the whole period of time which shown on line graph. Predictions
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rate will continue to increase and reach the highest population 10 to 180 while whales will fall down to 70 and
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will extinct in 2022.
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IELTS academic The line graph shows date about the number of wildlife animals which are Bears, Dolphins and Whales over a period of six years between 2017 and 2022

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