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The provided bar graph illustrates the comparision of the quantities of the internet websites, utilized by customers in Canada in 2014 and 2015.

The provided bar graph illustrates the comparision of the quantities of the internet websites, utilized by customers in Canada in 2014 and 2015. AwY1X
As a general trand, the number of users who had been consuming on site, was the highest, whereas the fewest number customers, served by five sites were observed in these chart. As far as majority in bar chart is concerned that there are many users who consume one sites and 2 sites; in contrast, five sites users are few. Moreover, it is worth noting that the increase of users are the same from 2014 to 2015 can be observed in this data. The most striking difference is that ther are many no site users; in other word, people utilize few sites, and it rised marginally these years. As regards with minority of this data, three sites users are the highest; notwithstanding, there are few five site users. Furthermore, it can be noticed that the increase of three sites, four sites and five sites constant move-forward. What is more remarkable difference that three sites users are increasing from 2014 to 2015. Unexpectedly, it has been rising steadly during these years.
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, was the highest, whereas the fewest number customers, served by five
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sites
were observed
in these chart.

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who consume one
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and 2
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;
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, five
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users
are few.
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, it is worth noting that the increase of
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are the same from 2014 to 2015 can
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utilize few
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, and it
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are the highest; notwithstanding, there are few five
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.
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, four
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and five
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constant
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are increasing from 2014 to 2015.
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IELTS academic The provided bar graph illustrates the comparision of the quantities of the internet websites, utilized by customers in Canada in 2014 and 2015.

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