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City transport mode shares in Asia,2012

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The table below shows the percentage of travellers using different types of transport in three cities which are Beijing, Delhi and Seoul, in 2012. Overall, travelling in the three cities was general popular by using private transport and buses. However, the less common way for transportation in the three cities was taxies. It can be seen that in the three cities between 23% and 33% of people used private transport, while the same proportion of people travelled by bus, which was 27% in each city. As to travel by rail transport, was a very popular mode of transport in Seoul which accounted for 38% of the total. While in Beijing and Delhi the per cents were 1% and 3% respectively. It is noticeable that Delhi depended very often on walking to travel, as opposed to other cities 35%, whereas this city experienced 0% on using taxies to travel. in both cities Beijing and Seoul, using taxies and walking was relatively unpopular. As shown in the table, also cycling and other transport did not use by people too much, where the data for cycling were 14%, 6%, 1%, and for others transport was between 2% and 5% and 3% in Beijing, Delhi and Seoul in the mentioned order.
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travellers
using
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different
types of
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transport
in three
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cities
which are Beijing, Delhi and Seoul, in 2012.

Overall
, travelling in the three
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cities
was general popular by using private
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transport
and buses.
However
, the less common way for transportation in the three
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cities
was
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taxies
.

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seen
that in the three
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cities
between 23% and 33% of
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people
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used
private
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transport
, while the same proportion of
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people
travelled by bus, which was 27% in each city.

As to travel by rail
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transport
, was a
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very
popular mode of
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transport
in Seoul which accounted for 38% of the total. While in Beijing and Delhi the per cents were 1% and 3%
respectively
.

It is noticeable that Delhi depended
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very
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often
on walking to travel, as opposed to other
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cities
35%, whereas this city experienced 0% on using
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taxies
to travel.
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in
both
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cities
Beijing and Seoul, using
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taxies
and walking was
relatively
unpopular.

As shown in the table,
also
cycling and other
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transport
did not
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use
by
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people
too much, where the data for cycling were 14%, 6%, 1%, and for others
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transport
was between 2% and 5% and 3% in Beijing, Delhi and Seoul in the mentioned order.
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