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map of Colwick Arts Centre

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These 2 maps demonstrate the changes of Colwick Arts Centre undergone from 2005 up to now. A quick look suggests several noticeable changes from construction of new buildings to providing green area. Commencing with the west part of the map, The meeting room is separated into 2 individual rooms located in the upper left-hand corner and the drama studio has been built on the right side of them. The snack bar has been developed into a café and moved to the bottom of the Art Center. The two galleries were been merged and moved to the west, on top of the café in order to expansion of concert hall. The new toilet which is half in size, is relocated to the opposite side. The Cinema and the concert hall that are next to each other, were shared the building in the middle of the center in the past. As this common building demolished, the central exhibition area has been built there in a round shape. One of the most remarkable modifications is transformation of the wasteland to the outdoor exhibition and performance area in the south of the art center. It contains a stage surrounded by trees. In spite of all these considerable changes, the information desk has been remained in its place.
These 2 maps demonstrate the
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changes
of Colwick Arts
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Centre
undergone from 2005 up to
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now
. A quick look suggests several noticeable
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
from construction of new buildings to providing green area.

Commencing with the west part of the map, The meeting room
is separated
into 2 individual rooms located in the upper
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
-hand corner and the drama studio has
been built
on the right side of them. The snack bar has
been developed
into a café and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
moved
to the bottom of the Art Center. The two galleries
were been
merged and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
moved
to the west, on top of the café in order to expansion of concert hall.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
new toilet which is half in size,
is relocated
to the opposite side.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
Cinema and the concert hall that are
next
to each other,
were shared
the building in the middle of the center in the past. As this common building demolished, the central exhibition area has
been built
there in a round shape.

One of the most remarkable modifications is transformation of the wasteland to the outdoor exhibition and performance area in the south of the art center. It contains a stage surrounded by trees.
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In spite of
all these considerable
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
, the information desk has
been remained
in its place.

IELTS academic map of Colwick Arts Centre

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4 paragraphs
213 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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