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The proportion of the energy produced from different sources in a country between 1985 and 2003.

The proportion of the energy produced from different sources in a country between 1985 and 2003. LQRG

The given three pie chart illustrates the information about the production and consumption of coffee and the data about the disturbing profit from it in different sectorsIt can be clearly seen that, in the year production area, with regard to south africa, it accounted and experienced a 21%rise to 2 times in consumption area in europe. In addition, as regard to America, it comprised of 30 %in the consumed sector, which increased to 10% in the profit gases for exporters. furthermore, the initial figure for rest of the world was 11% and an incline of 12%was observed by an end. besides that, delivery had the ratio of 22 %in the beginning, fell to 12%in the manufacture area.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 three pie Possible agreement error. The noun 'chart' seems to be countable, so consider using: "charts".charts
chart
 illustrates the information about the production and consumption of coffee and the data about the disturbing profit from it in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
Possible spelling mistake found.sectors It
sectorsIt
 can be clearly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that, in the year production area, with regard to If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.South Africa
south africa
, it accounted and experienced a 21%rise to 2 times in consumption area in Possible spelling mistake found.EuropeEuropa
europe
. In addition
, as regard to America, it comprised of 30 Possible spelling mistake found.inwinbinpintinmin
%in
 the consumed sector, which increased to 10% in the profit gases for exporters. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterFurthermore
furthermore
, the initial figure for rest of the world was 11% and an incline of 12%was observed
 by an This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterBesides
besides
 that, delivery had the ratio of 22 Possible spelling mistake found.inwinbinpintinmin
%in
 the beginning, fell to 12%in the manufacture area. 