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The proportion of the energy produced from different sources in a country between 1985 and 2003.

The proportion of the energy produced from different sources in a country between 1985 and 2003. LQRG
The given three pie chart illustrates the information about the production and consumption of coffee and the data about the disturbing profit from it in different sectorsIt can be clearly seen that, in the year production area, with regard to south africa, it accounted and experienced a 21%rise to 2 times in consumption area in europe. In addition, as regard to America, it comprised of 30 %in the consumed sector, which increased to 10% in the profit gases for exporters. furthermore, the initial figure for rest of the world was 11% and an incline of 12%was observed by an end. besides that, delivery had the ratio of 22 %in the beginning, fell to 12%in the manufacture area.
The
given
three pie
chart
illustrates the information about the production and consumption of coffee and the data about the disturbing profit from it in
different
sectorsIt
can be
clearly
seen
that, in the year production area, with regard to
south africa
, it accounted and experienced a 21%rise to 2 times in consumption area in
europe
.
In addition
, as regard to America, it comprised of 30
%in
the consumed sector, which increased to 10% in the profit gases for exporters.
furthermore
, the initial figure for rest of the world was 11% and an incline of 12%
was observed
by an
end
.
besides
that, delivery had the ratio of 22
%in
the beginning, fell to 12%in the manufacture area.
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IELTS academic The proportion of the energy produced from different sources in a country between 1985 and 2003.

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