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The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.

The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. mB7r

The displayed diagram is given information about the process by which geothermal energy is used in the production of electricity. As an overall area, there are five steps in the process. Starting from pumping down cold water into geothermal zones, meanwhile, to producing electricity from the generator which is then sent into the electrical grid. In the first step, cold water is pumped down 4. 5 km through the injection well. Next, the water is injected into the geothermal area, where hot rocks heat the water up as it passes through the earth. However, once the water has been heated up, it enters the production well and is then pumped up to the ground and into the condenser. On the other hand, the last two stages are carried out above ground at the power plant. First of all, the stream is produced from the hot water in the condenser. In the following step, the steam passes into the turbine and makes it a spin. Finally, the generator, which is powered by the turbine and produces electricity where it is then transferred into the electric grid via the power line.

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given
 information about the process by which geothermal energy is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 in the production of electricity.

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 area, there are five steps in the process. Starting from pumping down This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chillyfrosty
cold
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water
 into geothermal zones, meanwhile, to producing electricity from the generator which is then This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 into the electrical grid.

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 step, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chillyfrosty
cold
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water
is pumped
 down 4. 5 km through the injection well. Next
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
is injected
 into the geothermal area, where hot rocks heat the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 up as it passes through the earth. However
, once the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 has been heated
 up, it enters the production well and is then pumped up to the ground and into the condenser.

On the other hand
, the last two stages are carried
 out above ground at the power plant. This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, the stream is produced
 from the hot You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 in the condenser. In the following step, the steam passes into the turbine and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 it a spin. Finally
, the generator, which is powered
 by the turbine and produces electricity where it is then transferred into the electric grid via the power line. 