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The graphs below show the number of medals won by the top five countries in the summer and winter Olympics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below show the number of medals won by the top five countries in the summer and winter Olympics. wYre
The given bar graphs illustrate information about which nation won the highest number of medals (with gold, silver and bronze catagory) in the winter and in the sunmer Olympic. Overall, it is apparent from the graph that Norway has won the highest number of medals in winter games with equal proportion of gold, silver and bronze whereas Russia won the least medals. Moreover, United States took the first place whereas France took the last place in terms of Winning the highest medals in the summer Olympic. In the winter Olympic, Norway has won the largest amount of medals at more than 350, followed by United States and Germany which received 300 and 240 medals severally. Furthermore, there was a negligible difference between Russia's and Canada's medals, which won 180 and 190 respectively. In the summer Olympic, United States was on the first place and earned 2500 medals which was three times higher than Great Britain which won 800 medals. The number of medals achieved by Russia and Germany were between 1500 and 2000. However, France took the last place with just 650 winning medals.
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(with gold, silver and bronze
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catagory
) in the winter and in the
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Olympic.

Overall
, it is apparent from the graph that Norway has won the highest number of
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medals
in winter games with equal proportion of gold, silver and bronze whereas Russia won the least
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medals
.
Moreover
, United States took the
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whereas France took the last
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in terms of Winning the highest
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medals
in the summer Olympic.

In the winter Olympic, Norway has won the largest amount of
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medals
at more than 350, followed
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and Germany which received 300 and 240
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medals
severally
.
Furthermore
, there was a negligible difference between Russia's and Canada's
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medals
, which won 180 and 190
respectively
. In the summer Olympic, United States was on the
first
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place
and earned 2500
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medals
which was three times higher than Great Britain which won 800
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medals
. The number of
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medals
achieved by Russia and Germany were between 1500 and 2000.
However
, France took the last
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place
with
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650 winning
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IELTS academic The graphs below show the number of medals won by the top five countries in the summer and winter Olympics.

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