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the process of making tea.

the process of making tea. 5BR5m
The pictures highlight the steps involved in making tea. There are 18 stages in this process, from growing tea to enjoying a cup of tea. Tea is grown in many parts of the world, and mainly in India and China. At the beginning, tea seeds are sown in the ground, under the sunshine, the plants gradually grows and so on until one day the tea trees are big enough, they are picked and put in baskets by the farmers. After that, they are dried in the sun for about 1 to 2 days. The subsequent step is that dry tea is packed into boxes and loaded onto a lorry. And then tea boxes are delivered to the markets, supermarkets and maybe grocery stores as well. Finally, the tea boxes are bought by customers and taken to the tea house. Before the customers enjoy tea, tea must be steeped with boiling water within two minutes. Next, they can add milk to the tea to make the taste even better. And finally, drink and enjoy it.
The pictures highlight the steps involved in making
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tea
. There are 18 stages in this process, from growing
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tea
to enjoying a cup of
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tea
.
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Tea
is grown
in
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many
parts of the world, and
mainly
in India and China. At the beginning,
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tea
seeds
are sown
in the ground, under the sunshine, the plants
gradually
grows and
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so
on until one day the
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tea
trees are
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big
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enough
, they
are picked
and put in baskets by the farmers. After that, they
are dried
in the sun for about 1 to 2 days. The subsequent step is that dry
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tea
is packed
into boxes and loaded onto a lorry. And then
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tea
boxes
are delivered
to the markets, supermarkets and maybe grocery stores
as well
.

Finally
, the
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tea
boxes are
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bought
by customers and taken to the
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tea
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house
.
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Before
the customers enjoy
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tea
,
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tea
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must
be steeped
with boiling water within two minutes.
Next
, they can
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add
milk to the
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tea
to
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make
the taste even better. And
finally
, drink and enjoy it.
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IELTS academic the process of making tea.

Academic
  American English
2 paragraphs
174 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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