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The chart shows the consumption of tea and coffee in five cities in Australia in last four weeks. With the percentage of city residents we are able to recognize how often fresh coffee and instant coffee are in demand. When it comes to drinking beverage, the all five cities have less interest in drinking tea. Fresh coffee is in high demand in Sydney with 47 per cent and mostly less in Brisbane with 34 per cent. On the other hand, 56 per cent of Hobart citizen prefer generally instant coffee over fresh coffee less than 40 per cent love to have fresh coffee as their beverage. According to the chart the 64 per cent of native of Melbourne extensively love to go café for their liquid refreshment in last four weeks. The aborigine of the Brisbane and Adelaide seems to have almost equal per cent of fresh coffee and instant coffee in their values but in terms of going café vary a little by 5 per cent, Adelaide got nearly 50 per cent and Brisbane got 55 per cent.
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the consumption of tea and
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coffee
in five cities in Australia in last four weeks. With the percentage of city residents we are able to recognize how
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often
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fresh
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coffee
and instant
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coffee
are in demand.

When it
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to drinking beverage, the all five cities have less interest in drinking tea.
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Fresh
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is in high demand in Sydney with 47 per cent and
mostly
less in Brisbane with 34 per cent.

On the other hand
, 56 per cent of Hobart citizen prefer
generally
instant
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coffee
over
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fresh
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coffee
less than 40 per cent
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love
to have
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fresh
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coffee
as their beverage.

According to the chart the 64 per cent of native of Melbourne
extensively
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love
to go café for their liquid refreshment in last four weeks. The aborigine of the Brisbane and Adelaide seems to have almost equal per cent of
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fresh
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coffee
and instant
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coffee
in their values
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in terms of going café vary a
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by 5 per cent, Adelaide
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50 per cent and Brisbane
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55 per cent.
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