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The two maps below show the road access to the hospital road in 2007 and 2010. XVKLA
The two layouts demonstrate the accessibility to the city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Overall, a massive development can be seen between these three-span periods with additions of two roundabouts and expansions of parking areas in comparison to the start of the layout. In 2007, the entrance to the hospital area was through a ring road in the southern direction, which had given its way to the new car park built for the public: meanwhile, the parking, which was on the south side of the area, was reserved only for staff members. Initially, although the bus stops resembled in special symbol, in six different numbers, both sides of the hospital road were, on the other hand, being faded away, and new roundabouts were added in 2010. Furthermore, a new bus halt was being developed which had its connected roads toward both roundabouts for hospital and city roads passengers.
The two layouts demonstrate the accessibility to the city
hospital
in 2007 and 2010.
Overall
, a massive development can be
seen
between these three-span periods with additions of two roundabouts and expansions of parking areas
in comparison
to the
start
of the layout.

In 2007, the entrance to the
hospital
area was through a ring
road
in the southern direction, which had
given
its way to the new car park built for the public: meanwhile, the parking, which was on the south side of the area,
was reserved
only
for staff members.

Initially
, although the bus
stops
resembled in special symbol, in six
different
numbers, both sides of the
hospital
road
were,
on the other hand
,
being faded
away, and new roundabouts were
added
in 2010.

Furthermore
, a new bus halt was
being developed
which had its connected
roads
toward both roundabouts for
hospital
and city
roads
passengers.
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IELTS academic The two maps below show the road access to the hospital road in 2007 and 2010.

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