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the process of producing leather goods.

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A glance at the given diagram illustrates the process of producing leather goods. Overall, a closer look at the diagram reveals that there are 11 prominent stages in this process, starting with the animal skins being dried and ending with the products being sent to stores to be sold to customers. Look at the diagram in more detail, at the first stage of the process Animal skins are dried before sending to the workshop after arriving at the leather shop, washed in a mixture of water and lime. Subsequently, the skin is soaked in lime before being put into the flat press. The process continues with the flat skin soaked in a solution called tannin a mixture of water and vegetable matter. Subsequently, the leather is polished before being shipped to the factory. Finally, the products are selected and delivered to the stores.
A glance at the
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diagram illustrates the
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process
of producing leather
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goods
.

Overall
, a closer look at the diagram reveals that there are 11 prominent stages in this
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process
, starting with the animal
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skins
being dried
and ending with the products being
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sent
to stores to
be sold
to customers.

Look at the diagram in more detail, at the
first
stage of the
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process
Animal
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skins
are dried
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before
sending to the workshop after arriving at the leather shop, washed in a mixture of water and lime.
Subsequently
, the
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skin
is soaked
in lime
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before
being put
into the flat press.

The
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process
continues with the flat
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skin
soaked in a solution called tannin a mixture of water and vegetable matter.
Subsequently
, the leather
is polished
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before
being shipped
to the factory.
Finally
, the products
are selected
and delivered to the stores.

IELTS academic the process of producing leather goods.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
143 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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