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The diagrams below give information about reforestation programs.

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The first bar chart illustrates reforestation rate in different places around the world such as Ireland, Thailand, Hungry and Tasmania in 2006, 2015 and 2025, while the second bar chart gives info about prediction for reforestation rate worldwide through the 10 years. At the same time the pie chart demonstrates the percentage of concernment in reforestation. Overall, it is noticeable that reforestation rate in these four countries as well as in the entire world increases throughout the years. The strongest growth was seen in Hungry. In addition, the charts suggest that current concernment in reforestation worldwide is high enough. In terms of first bar chart, the highest rate will be achieved in Ireland in 2025, at 1. 7, while the lowest was noticed in Hungry in 2006, at 0. 5. A bit less than Ireland, Tasmania would get the score of 1. 6 in 2025. By the 2015 the reforestation rate in Tasmania has speeded up and reached the same point as the Ireland, at 1. 5. However the next few years reforestation rate in this region would speed down. On the other hand, Thailand did not make any progress in reforestation in the first 10 years, soon after which it jumped to 1. 3. Hungry was the least progressive country in this branch, having the score of 0. 5 at the beginning of 2006 and 0. 6 in 2015. However this number rose sharply by almost 2 times in 2025, at 1. 1. Regarding the second bar chart, it shows the change in the rate of reforestation around the world. It is immediately evident that in 10 years until 2025, there will be a slight increase of 0. 3 points, and ultimately the final indicative state of the reforestation rate will be 1. 3. This trend is supported by the pie chart which indicates the current interest in reforestation. At first glance, it is noticeable that concernment in this business is pretty high, at 39%, while the great interest in this matter in relation to the entire interest is exactly a quarter. On the other side, it is obvious that non concernment in this sphere is 36%.
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illustrates reforestation
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in
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places around the world such as Ireland, Thailand,
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and Tasmania in 2006, 2015 and 2025, while the second bar
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gives info about prediction for reforestation
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rate
worldwide through the 10 years. At the same time the pie
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demonstrates the percentage of
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concernment
in reforestation.

Overall
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in these four countries
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in reforestation worldwide is high
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, the highest
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in Ireland in 2025, at 1. 7, while the lowest
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in 2006, at 0. 5. A bit less than Ireland, Tasmania would
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the score of 1. 6 in 2025. By the 2015 the reforestation
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in Tasmania has
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reforestation
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in this region would speed down.
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any progress in reforestation in the
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10 years,
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after which it jumped to 1. 3.
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was the least progressive country in this branch, having the score of 0. 5 at the beginning of 2006 and 0. 6 in 2015.
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of reforestation around the world. It is immediately evident that in 10 years until 2025, there will be a slight increase of 0. 3 points, and
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will be 1. 3.

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interest in reforestation. At
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glance, it is noticeable that
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