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The process diagram details the steps by which pineapples are produced for sale.

The process diagram details the steps by which pineapples are produced for sale. RNLRk

The given process depicts information about the steeps which pineapples are produced and shipped to overseas places. Looking from overall perspective, it is apparent that, beginning of process involve natural process, but latter phases include the man-made effort. The process commencing in natural environment where the the temperature is stand between 28 C and 30 C and because of the size, pineapples harvested for 3 major catagories. After the pineapples washed by water, small ones which is height is 26 cm, they peeled and sending to extractor for making the juice. Meanwhile medium length pineapples peeled and sliced for cans On the contrary, largest ones which is weight 2 kg are simply washed coated by wax and after that, filled into boxes. In final stage they shipped for later retail.

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 ones which is weight 2 kg are simply
 washed coated by wax and after that, filled into boxes. In final stage they shipped for later retail. 