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Information of six countries for young people's percentage in their universities in year 2000 and 2007

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The given table illustrates young people’s percentage at universities in six countries like Italy, UK, Spain, Poland, Norway, Finland for year 2000 and 2007. Overall, Finland had highest percentage of young people in 2000 and in 2007 Poland had highest percentage of young people at universities. As table shows us Italy had the lowest in year 2000 and Spain had the lowest in 2007. Firstly, in year 2000 countries like UK and Spain had similar 46% of young people at their universities and Finland had the highest 70% of young people. Poland and Norway had 64 and 66 percentage young people respectively. Secondly, in year 2007 Finland’s percentage of young people didn’t change over the years, it was same as year 2000, 70%. Poland had the highest 78% of young people at universities in year 2007 and Spain had the lowest 41% of young people at universities. Italy, UK and Norway had 52%, 54% and 65% respectively in year 2007.
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2000 and Spain had the lowest in 2007.

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IELTS academic Information of six countries for young people's percentage in their universities in year 2000 and 2007

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