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The two maps show the shopping mall, Southside, in its current form and its proposed expansion.

The two maps show the shopping mall, Southside, in its current form and its proposed expansion. 2begb

The two maps show the shopping mall, Southside, in its current form and its proposed expansion. Major changes that are shown in the planned development map o the shopping mall are the Expansion of Departmental store and Car parking. A new entrance is introduced for different entrance towards Departmental Store. Various stores are being introduced like Beauty Salon, Shoe store, Cosmetic store etc, . Things that remain the same are the west Entrance gate to the mall as well as the Supermarket and Toiler facility. With the expansion of the shopping mall, the Gold course and Park has been excluded from the area as the expansion of the mall. Expansion of Car parking area has covered the Fitness Centre.

The two maps This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 the shopping You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshopping centerplazamarketshopping mall
mall
, Southside, in its This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 form and its proposed expansion.

Major This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 that are shown
 in the planned development map o the shopping You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshopping centerplazamarketshopping mall
mall
 are the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentextensionincreaseenlargementinflationspread
Expansion
 of Departmental You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
store
 and Car parking. A new entrance is introduced
 for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 entrance towards Departmental You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
Store
. Various You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
stores
 are being introduced
 like Beauty Salon, Shoe You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
store
, Cosmetic You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
store
 etcDid you just mean "," or "."?,.
, .
 Things that remain the same are the west Entrance gate to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshopping centerplazamarketshopping mall
mall
as well
 as the Supermarket and Toiler facility. With the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentextensionincreaseenlargementinflationspread
expansion
 of the shopping You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshopping centerplazamarketshopping mall
mall
, the Did you mean "golf"?Golf
Gold
 course and Park has been excluded
 from the area as the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentextensionincreaseenlargementinflationspread
expansion
 of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshopping centerplazamarketshopping mall
mall
. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentextensionincreaseenlargementinflationspread
Expansion
 of Car parking area has covered the Fitness Possible spelling mistake. 'Centre' is British English.Center
Centre
. 