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The process chart represents how a simple water filter is constructed and it functions to produce clean drinking water.

The process chart represents how a simple water filter is constructed and it functions to produce clean drinking water. 2KAxb
The process chart represents how a simple water filter is constructed and it functions to produce clean drinking water. Overall, there are several steps involved in this process. If one step is missed the whole procedure will be halted. It can be clearly seen that in first step, improve water is put into a container. There are three layers, namely sand, charcoal and gravel with sand at the top and gravel at the bottom. There is a pipe line of clean water that attached with drinking water storage tank, where clean water is stored. Then the top in the drum is turned on clean drinking water came out.
The process chart represents how a simple
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water
filter
is constructed
and it functions to produce
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clean
drinking water.

Overall
, there are several steps involved in this process.
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If
one step
is missed
the whole procedure will
be halted
.

It can be
clearly
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seen
that in
first
step,
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improve
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water
is put
into a container. There are three layers,
namely
sand, charcoal and gravel with sand at the top and gravel at the bottom. There is a pipe line of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
clean
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water
that attached with drinking
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
storage tank, where
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
clean
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
is stored
. Then the top in the drum
is turned
on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
clean
drinking
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
came out.

IELTS academic The process chart represents how a simple water filter is constructed and it functions to produce clean drinking water.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
108 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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