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The process chart provides information on how solar energy can be used to provide electricity in our houses.

The process chart provides information on how solar energy can be used to provide electricity in our houses. LwM7R
The process chart provides information on how solar energy can be used to provide electricity in our houses. This is a standard process that involves 3 steps to easily and effectively power one's domicile. Firstly, the raw solar energy is captured by photovoltaic plates placed at the top of the roof. The energy entrapped produces power in DC. But, it cannot be used for home appliances as of now, therefore, an inverter is used to convert it from DC to AC. This transformed AC passes through the Generation meter, which is attached to the consumer unit to track the number of units consumed by each household. Further, before giving electricity to the house gadgets, it travels via the unit, where the power supply from the national grid to home also happens. It acts as a regulator, whose job is to redirect the excess energy back to the grid and the rest is utilized by our machinery.
The process chart provides information on how solar
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to provide electricity in our
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. This is a standard process that involves 3 steps to
easily
and
effectively
power one's domicile.

Firstly
, the raw solar
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energy
is captured
by photovoltaic plates placed at the top of the roof. The
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energy
entrapped produces power in DC.
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But
, it cannot be
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used
for home appliances as of
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now
,
therefore
, an inverter is
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used
to convert it from DC to AC. This transformed AC passes through the Generation meter, which
is attached
to the consumer unit to
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track
the number of units consumed by each household.

Further
,
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before
giving electricity to the
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house
gadgets, it travels via the unit, where the power supply from the national grid to home
also
happens. It acts as a regulator, whose job is to redirect the excess
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energy
back to the grid and the rest
is utilized
by our machinery.
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