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erosion of a headland task 1

erosion of a headland task 1 kePG2
The diagrams illustrate the steps of a headland erosion which is the consequence of the sea action. There are four stages to explain how it happens. As we know, erosion of headland is a natural process which is caused by water beats. When waves frequently start to hit against the surface of the cliff, firstly, weak areas of rock erode. After that, it creates a hollow on the rock wall and cave becomes arch. The most famous examples of coastal erosion which is occurred by lots of tides are Durdle Door and Dorset. On the other hand, waves sometimes strongly hit that arch area and the roof of cave collapse into the sea because of the water beats. Meanwhile, water continue beats the stack and headland retreating so, this process creates a stump. Overall, this natural action needs a long time period and lots of phases to create this kind of coastal erosion.
The diagrams illustrate the steps of a headland
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which is the consequence of the sea action. There are four stages to
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explain
how it happens.

As we know,
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erosion
of headland is a natural process which
is caused
by water beats. When waves
frequently
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start
to hit against the surface of the cliff,
firstly
, weak areas of rock erode. After that, it creates a hollow on the rock wall and cave becomes arch. The most
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famous
examples of coastal
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which
is occurred
by lots of tides are
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Durdle
Door and Dorset.

On the other hand
, waves
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sometimes
strongly
hit that arch area and the roof of cave collapse into the sea
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of the water beats. Meanwhile, water continue beats the stack and headland retreating
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, this process creates a stump.

Overall
, this natural action needs a long time period and lots of phases to create this kind of coastal
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erosion
.
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IELTS academic erosion of a headland task 1

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
153 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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