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The process chart depicts that how coffee is made

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To commence with, the first step is to be sorted by hands after that all the beans are cleaned. Frequently, beans are kept in the sun for dryness and it takes almost four weeks for the dryness. In the next stage, the beans are turned to the other sides for the dryness process. Nextly, the beans are stored in silo and then sent to the mill for the hulling process of the beans so that they are grading and the rough substances and tiny particles are moved out from the good beans. Subsequently, beans are went for bagging separately. In the tenth stage, some coffee beans are went for roasting. In the last, all the roasted beans are packed and sold. Overall, it is apparent that in this process 12 steps are involved if any one step is missed then the whole process will be halted.
To commence with, the
first
step is to
be sorted
by hands after that all the
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beans
are cleaned
.
Frequently
,
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beans
are
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kept
in the sun for dryness and it takes almost four weeks for the dryness. In the
next
stage, the
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beans
are turned
to the other sides for the dryness
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process
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Nextly
, the
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beans
are stored
in silo and then
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sent
to the mill for the hulling
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process
of the
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beans
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so
that they are grading and the rough substances and tiny particles are
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moved
out from the
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good
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beans
.
Subsequently
,
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beans
are
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went
for bagging
separately
. In the tenth stage,
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some
coffee
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beans
are
Consider using a past participle here: "gone".
went
for roasting. In the last, all the roasted
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beans
are packed
and sold.
Overall
, it is apparent that in this
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process
12 steps
are involved
if
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any one
step
is missed
then the whole
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process
will
be halted
.
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