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The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the three countries from 1990 to 2004.

The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the three countries from 1990 to 2004. Ba1Rp

The given chart illustrates the proportion of unemployed people in three nations in fifteen years from 1990. Overall, what stands out from the graph is that unemployed rates of the three countries fluctuated significantly. In the first two years, the rate of unemployment in USA and UK witnessed an opposite trend. In particular, the rate of US increased sharply to about 3. 5% whereas UK’s ratio plunged to the proportion of under 2%. In the same period of time, the jobless people rates in Japan still remained unchanged. From 1992 to 2000, both UK and Japan shared the same trend when their figures initially rocketed before witnessing a massive decrease from 1996 and 1998. In terms of the USA, its unemployment rates went up dramatically from 1994 and finally reached their peak at approximately 6% in 2000.

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 in three nations in fifteen years from 1990.

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, what stands out from the graph is that unemployed You use this word too often, consider replacing it withestimatequotapercentageamountstandard
rates
 of the three countries fluctuated significantly
.

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 two years, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withestimatequotapercentageamountstandard
rate
 of unemployment A determiner is probably missing here: "in the USA".in the USA
in USA
 and UK witnessed an opposite trend. In particular
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withestimatequotapercentageamountstandard
rate
 of US increased sharply
 to about 3. 5% whereas UK’s ratio plunged to the proportion of under 2%. In the same period of time, the jobless This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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rates
 in Japan still
 remained unchanged.

From 1992 to 2000, both UK and Japan shared the same trend when their figures initially
 rocketed This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 witnessing a massive decrease Nonstandard phrase. Did you mean: "from 1996 to 1998"?from 1996 to 1998
from 1996 and 1998
. In terms of the USA, its unemployment You use this word too often, consider replacing it withestimatequotapercentageamountstandard
rates
 went up dramatically
 from 1994 and finally
 reached their peak at approximately 6% in 2000. 