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Writing task 1 the chart give the information about the garbage collected by recycling center from 2011 to 2015

Writing task 1 the chart give the information about the garbage collected by recycling center from 2011 to 2015 D2nxk
The given bar graphs depict the comparison between distinct trash products accumulated by a reusable center from 2011 to 2015. From an overall prospective, in all five years, the maximum paper garbage was collected by remarking center. The least trash was accumulated from garden. In all years, the amount of garbage had been fluctuated. As apparent from the diagram, in 2011 to 2014, the amount of paper trash was fluctuated; by 2015, it rose to the highest figure of 70 tonnes. However, the remarking center accumulated nearly, 45 tonnes of garbage of glass from 2011 to 2014; in 2015, the glass trash was rose to 52 tonnes. It is further clear that from 2011 to 2015, the trash of tin was fluctuated in a zig zag manner; foremost, it was 35 tonnes; after, it was inclined to 39 tonnes. The least trash gathered from garden in 2012, only 15 tonnes. In 2015, the remarking center collected 35 tonnes garden waster; followed by, 32tonnes in 2011 and 31 tonnes in 2013.
The
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given
bar graphs depict the comparison between distinct
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trash
products accumulated by a reusable center from 2011 to 2015.

From an
overall
prospective, in all five years, the maximum paper garbage
was collected
by remarking center. The least
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trash
was accumulated
from garden. In all years, the amount of garbage had
been fluctuated
.

As apparent from the diagram, in 2011 to 2014, the amount of paper
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trash
was fluctuated
; by 2015, it rose to the highest figure of 70 tonnes.
However
, the remarking center accumulated
nearly
, 45 tonnes of garbage of glass from 2011 to 2014; in 2015, the glass
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trash
was rose to 52 tonnes.

It is
further
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clear
that from 2011 to 2015, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trash
of tin
was fluctuated
in a
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zig zag
manner; foremost, it was 35 tonnes; after, it
was inclined
to 39 tonnes. The least
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trash
gathered from garden in 2012,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
15 tonnes. In 2015, the remarking center collected 35 tonnes garden waster; followed by, 32tonnes in 2011 and 31 tonnes in 2013.
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IELTS academic Writing task 1 the chart give the information about the garbage collected by recycling center from 2011 to 2015

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  American English
4 paragraphs
170 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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