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Problems with Car Production

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The graph describes the number of defects per 1000 vehicles in three factories over the three year period 1994 to 1996. Overall, Factory C had the highest defect rate, that Factory B had one year where defects dropped and that Factory A was the only factory to show a yearly decline in defects to a rate that equaled Factory B by 1996. In 1994, Factory A had approximately 23 defects per 1000 vehicles, dropping to roughly 21% a year later and to around 18% by the third year. Factory B started with the same defects that Factory A started with, fell to 15% a year later but returned to its initial level by the end of the period. Factory C started with the highest rate at about 28%, falling to an estimated 24% twelve months later, with perhaps a further 1% drop in 1996.

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