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The presented line chart illustrates how much coffee was exported from Brazil, Colombia and Costa Rica over the 10 year period from 2002 to 2012.

The presented line chart illustrates how much coffee was exported from Brazil, Colombia and Costa Rica over the 10 year period from 2002 to 2012. yG2DE
The presented line chart illustrates how much coffee was exported from Brazil, Colombia and Costa Rica over the 10 year period from 2002 to 2012. The amount is measured in millions of kilograms. In a nutshell, it is apparent that the levels of exports from all 3 countries rose despite some fluctuations over the decade. In the year 2002, Costa Rica exported coffee to other countries more than Brazil and Colombia, standing at 15 million kg. Among the other two, Brazil started with a fairly similar level of coffee production - 12 million kg. However, in the next 4 years, the quantity of coffee from Costa Rica declined almost two fold to 8 million kg. Meanwhile, Brazil and Columbia showed an increase in their coffee production - 15 million kg and 12 million kg respectively. According to the chart, the registered amount of coffee produced continued to rise in Brazil and Costa Rica by the year 2008. On the contrary, Colombia touched the lowest point of 3 million kg in its coffee export during the same period. Later in the next 4 years, Colombia witnessed a significant increase of 12 million kg in its production whereas the other 2 countries also experienced a considerable growth in their coffee export.
The presented line chart illustrates how much
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coffee
was exported
from Brazil, Colombia and Costa Rica over the 10
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year
period from 2002 to 2012. The amount
is measured
in
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millions
of kilograms. In a nutshell, it is apparent that the levels of exports from all 3 countries rose despite
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some
fluctuations over the decade.

In the
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year
2002, Costa Rica exported
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coffee
to other countries more than Brazil and Colombia, standing at 15
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million
kg. Among the other two, Brazil
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started
with a
fairly
similar level of
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coffee
production
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12
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million
kg.
However
, in the
next
4 years, the quantity of
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coffee
from Costa Rica declined almost
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two fold
to 8
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million
kg. Meanwhile, Brazil and Columbia
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showed
an increase in their
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coffee
production
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-
15
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million
kg and 12
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million
kg
respectively
.

According to the chart, the registered amount of
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coffee
produced continued to rise in Brazil and Costa Rica by the
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year
2008.
On the contrary
, Colombia touched the lowest point of 3
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million
kg in its
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coffee
export during the same period. Later in the
next
4 years, Colombia witnessed a significant increase of 12
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million
kg in its production whereas the other 2 countries
also
experienced a considerable growth in their
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coffee
export.
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IELTS academic The presented line chart illustrates how much coffee was exported from Brazil, Colombia and Costa Rica over the 10 year period from 2002 to 2012.

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