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healthcare resources and life expectancy in different countries

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The charts compare medical resources and how long the citizens are expected to live in various countries around the world. It can be clearly seen that the hospital in Japan provides the highest number of beds while its citizens spend the least on treating their health. Conversely, those in the US have a different pattern from Japan’s According to the bar chart, the figure for hospital beds in Japan is considerably higher than other seven countries, registered for 14 beds per thousand of the population. In Germany, it is supplied at the second rank, 8 beds per thousand of its citizens, followed by the Netherlands where this resource is occupied for just over 4 units. However, the rest of the countries have fewer resources to serve their population at lower than 4 beds per thousand of the population. Based on the table, individuals in the US spend much more money on their health that are threefold from the lowest amount of the money spent in Japan. In contrast, the average life expectancy of Japanese people is longer than the US’s by 5 years from age at 83.

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