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The present water supply system

The diagram illustrates the way the water supply system currently works in Australia and the plans for plans future changes. Overall, the process consists of four stages, beginning with the Dam-storage and ending with the River. First of all the current water supply system shows the pure water is stored in a dam before being transferred to a city to used by households, shops, and factories. From the city, storm-water is directed straight into the river whereas waste-water is sent to the water treatment plant to be processed. After issues can be pointed out which if corrected for the future could lead to this being a more complete water supply system and providing its residents and businesses better supply of water.

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