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the precentage of average household

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The pie charts illustrate the precentage of average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in given period. Overall, as it can be clearly seen that in both cuontries, the most considerable proportions of expenditures were housing and other goods, services. The least proportions were health care and transport in given countries respectively in the year 2010. In terms of expenditures of japan. Housing and transport almost one fifth (21% exactly) the biggest proportions were other goods and services. It was 29% that equal to one thrid of pie chart. Expenditures were spent for food that one fourth consisted of pie chart. The least proportion was health care (6% exactly). With regards to in Malaysia's precentage different from Japan, for example precentage of housing 34% health and Transport decreased by 1 time 3% and 10% correspondingly. Expenditures for food grew by 3%, more interestingly other goods and services declined by 3%.

The pie charts illustrate the Possible spelling mistake found.percentage
precentage
 of average household You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisbursementoutlayfigureconsumptionpricerate
expenditures
 in Japan and Malaysia in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 period.

Overall
, as it can be clearly
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seen
 that in both Possible spelling mistake found.countries
cuontries
, the most considerable proportions of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisbursementoutlayfigureconsumptionpricerate
expenditures
 were housing and other This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
, services. The least proportions were health care and transport in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 countries respectively
 in the year 2010.

In terms of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisbursementoutlayfigureconsumptionpricerate
expenditures
 of japan. Housing and transport almost one fifth (21% exactly) the biggest proportions were other This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
 and services. It was 29% that equal to one Possible spelling mistake found.third
thrid
 of pie chart. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisbursementoutlayfigureconsumptionpricerate
Expenditures
were spent
 for food that one fourth consisted of pie chart. The least You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbulkscaleratiocapacityshareportion
proportion
 was health care (6% exactly).

Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".In regard toWith regard toRegarding
With regards to
 in Malaysia's Possible spelling mistake found.percentage
precentage
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 from Japan, for example
Possible spelling mistake found.percentage
precentage
 of housing 34% health and Transport decreased by 1 time 3% and 10% correspondingly
. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisbursementoutlayfigureconsumptionpricerate
Expenditures
 for food grew by 3%, more interestingly
 other This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
 and services declined by 3%. 