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The table below shows the information and predictions regarding the change in percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries.

The table below shows the information and predictions regarding the change in percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries. r88nJ
The table provides us the information and predictions regarding the change in percentage of the multitude aged 65 and over in 3 countries. Overall, the population of elderly people has shown rise in all three countries between 1988 and 2000 and predicted to 2030. The percentage of old people is the highest quantity in Germany for anticipation, and the lowest amount can be seen in UK. Between 1988 and 2000, the aging percentage of the population in Germany and Canada is increased around 5% to 25, 32% and 20, 67% appropriately. But on the other hand in UK showed little change in the quota of population aged 65 plus people and went up to 15%. By 2030, it is anticipated that the population of people aged 65 and above will grow up around 5% again in all three countries. The percentage is forecast to reach 20, 35% in UK, 26, 35% in Canada and 30, 42% in Germany.
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of the multitude aged 65 and over in 3 countries.

Overall
, the
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population
of elderly
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has shown rise in all three countries between 1988 and 2000 and predicted to 2030. The
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of
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is the highest quantity in Germany for anticipation, and the lowest amount can be
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in UK.

Between 1988 and 2000, the aging
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in Germany and Canada
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around 5% to 25, 32% and 20, 67%
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on the other hand
in UK
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in the quota of
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population
aged 65 plus
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people
and went up to 15%.

By 2030, it
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that the
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of
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aged 65 and above will grow up around 5% again in all three countries. The
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is forecast to reach 20, 35% in UK, 26, 35% in Canada and 30, 42% in Germany.
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IELTS academic The table below shows the information and predictions regarding the change in percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries.

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