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The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007. Jooya
This line graph shows how many females and males are graduated during period from 1992 to 2007. It is clear from the graph the percentage of females is higher that males. According to what is shown, number of graduated students between 1992 and 1995 is gradually increased. However, after that it get drop down for both females and males untill 2001. In other hand, since 2002 number of graduated females get dramatically increased from 110, 000 graduated to reached its peak in 2007 where almost 150, 000 females students are graduated in Canada. In addition, number of males students is speedily increased since 2002. Moreover, its rocketed to its peak in 2007 to be almost 100, 000 males students graduated. To sum up we could say that, number of females students who are graduated in Canadan is double number of males students. Furthermore, both number of graduated genders are quickly increased between period 2002 and 2007.
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from 110, 000 graduated to reached its peak in 2007 where almost 150, 000
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007.

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