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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world

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The charts give data on the amount of water utilized for various aims in six territories of the world. Overall, water used for agricultural purposes accounts for the maximum quantity, whereas the minimum percentage was observed in domestic use in six areas. In detail, in three places named Africa, Central Asia and South East Asia people make use of the greatest proportion of water in agriculture, standing at approximately 80%, however this indicator for South America shows a 10% decrease and becomes 71%. These figures in Europe and North America reach 39% and 32% respectively. On the other side, there is a minimal quantity of water used in industrial and domestic chores in Africa, Central Asia and South-east Asia, consequently, these segments change between 5% and 12%. However, the total percentage of water used in industry in Europe and North America increase remarkably and is equal to 48% and 53% accordingly, hence, these indicator in South America constitute only 10%. Residents in the whole America and Europe utilize water in housework slightly, reaching to about a quarter.
The charts give data on the amount of
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utilized for various aims in six territories of the world.

Overall
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for agricultural purposes accounts for the maximum quantity, whereas the minimum percentage
was observed
in domestic
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in six areas.

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of the greatest proportion of
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in agriculture, standing at approximately 80%,
however
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a 10% decrease and becomes 71%. These figures in Europe and North America reach 39% and 32%
respectively
. On the other side, there is a minimal quantity of
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in industrial and domestic chores in Africa, Central Asia and South-east Asia,
consequently
, these segments
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between 5% and 12%.
However
, the total percentage of
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in industry in Europe and North America increase
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and is equal to 48% and 53%
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,
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in South America constitute
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10%. Residents in the whole America and Europe utilize
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in housework
slightly
, reaching to about a quarter.
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IELTS academic The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world

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