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The plans below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. IELTS Cambridge 13 Writing Task 1 Map Sports Centre

The plans below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. 91A0
The two structure depicts the information of current arrangements of a university's sports Centre and the changes after it's renovation. Overall, the university is planning to add more facilities to the upcoming sports Centre as compared to the current one. In the current sports Centre, there are indoor as well as outdoor space. The indoor section includes a reception hall on the main entrance and a changing room also a seating room on the either side of the reception. Furthermore, there is a 25m pool inside the Centre whereas, a gym room attached on the back side of the gym room. Moreover, two outdoor courts are built on the two side of the sports Centre. On the other hand, the future plans are more systematic where there is only indoor sections and nine extra rooms added on the current sports Centre. Firstly, two dance studio on the east side and a sports hall is built on the middle of old seating room and dance studio. In the front entrance, both side of the reception, there is a cafe and a sports shop. While in the current sports Centre, there are two outdoor courts, but in the future plan, the west side outdoor courts will replace to a leisure pool. Finally, they add extra two changing room on the two corner side of the reception.
The two structure depicts the information of
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current
arrangements of a university's
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sports
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Centre
and the
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changes
after it's renovation.
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, the university is planning to
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add
more facilities to the upcoming
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sports
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Centre
as compared to the
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current
one. In the
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current
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sports
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Centre
, there are indoor
as well
as
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outdoor
space. The indoor section includes a
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reception
hall on the main entrance and a changing
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room
also
a seating
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room
on the either side of the
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reception
.
Furthermore
, there is a
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25m
pool inside the
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whereas, a gym
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room
attached on the back side of the gym
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room
.
Moreover
, two
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outdoor
courts
are built
on the two side of the
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sports
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Centre
.
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, the future plans are more systematic where there is
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only
indoor sections and nine extra
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rooms
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added
on the
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current
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sports
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Centre
.
Firstly
, two dance
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studio
on the east side and a
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sports
hall
is built
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on the middle
of
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old
seating
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room
and dance studio. In the front entrance, both side of the
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reception
, there is a
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cafe
and a
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sports
shop. While in the
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current
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sports
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Centre
, there are two
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outdoor
courts,
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but
in the future plan, the west side
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outdoor
courts will replace to a leisure pool.
Finally
, they
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add
extra two changing
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room
on the two corner side of the
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reception
.
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IELTS academic The plans below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.

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