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The plans below show the layout of a university’s sports center now, and how it will look after development.

The plans below show the layout of a university’s sports center now, and how it will look after development. r2Bk
Given are maps illustrating a university’s sports center’s layout in the present and its renovation for the future. It is evident from the information supplied that two outdoor courts will be merged with the center, making the sports center bigger. Moreover, many new facilities such as a café, a shop, two dance studios, a leisure pool, and two changing rooms will be constructed. As shown by the current map, the center has a pool with 25m depth and a gym on its northside. There is a reception in the southside of the center as well as a changing room on the westside and a seating area on the eastside. Meanwhile, two large outdoor courts can be seen on each side of the center. Regarding the future plan, it can be seen that the gym will be strengthened to the east, making it more spacious. The entire main building will be unchanged, while eastern outdoor courts will be replaced by a new sports hall and two dance studios. Also noteworthy is that western outdoor courts will be transformed into a new large leisure pool. A new changing room and a sports shop will be built on the south-west corner of the center, whereas on the opposite side (south-east) another changing room with a café will be erected.
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are maps illustrating a university’s
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sports
center’s layout in the present and its renovation for the future.

It is evident from the information supplied that two
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outdoor
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courts
will
be merged
with the center, making the
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sports
center bigger.
Moreover
,
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many
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new
facilities such as a café, a shop, two dance studios, a leisure pool, and two
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changing
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rooms
will
be constructed
.

As shown by the
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current
map, the center has a pool with
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25m
depth and a gym on its
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northside
. There is a reception in the
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southside
of the center
as well
as a
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changing
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room
on the
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westside
and a seating area on the
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eastside
. Meanwhile, two large
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outdoor
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courts
can be
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seen
on each side of the center.

Regarding the future plan, it can be
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seen
that the gym will
be strengthened
to the east, making it more spacious. The entire main building will
be unchanged
, while eastern
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outdoor
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courts
will
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by a
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new
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sports
hall and two dance studios.
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Also
noteworthy is that western
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outdoor
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courts
will
be transformed
into a
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new
large leisure pool. A
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new
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changing
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room
and a
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sports
shop will
be built
on the south-west corner of the center, whereas on the opposite side (south-east) another
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changing
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room
with a café will
be erected
.
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IELTS academic The plans below show the layout of a university’s sports center now, and how it will look after development.

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