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essay about first time mothers

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The provided graph illustrates the various age groups of females who gave birth to their first child over three distinct years ( 1966, 1989 and 2006). The calibration of data is done in percentage. Overall, while the trend of young mothers declined, the graph of women aged between 30-34, witnessed a gradual climb over the forty-year period. The oldest age group (40+), however, was stable as holding the least percentage of women who gave their first birth. In regard to the women aged 19 or below and between 20 to 24, the trajectory declined steadily from over 35% in 1966 to around 11% in 2006 for the former, whereas the latter started with around 62% (the highest contributor) and finally dropped at around 41%. A fluctuating trend is conspicuous for the age group of 25 to 29, which stood at around 38%, climbed up to approximately 51% in 1986 and finally took a dip at around 41 per cent. By contrast, the age groups of 25-29 and 30-34 rose significantly from 38 and 8 per cent to 49 and 29 per cent in the year 2006, respectively. Meanwhile, the women who aged 40 or more climbed up at just 5 per cent in the final year.

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women
 aged between 30-34, witnessed a gradual climb over the forty-year period. The oldest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
age
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group
 (40+), however
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women
 who gave their first
 birth.

In regard to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgirlwifedaughtermothershe
women
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between 20 to 24
, the trajectory declined steadily
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around
 11% in 2006 for the former, whereas the latter This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
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around
 62% (the highest contributor) and finally
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around
 41%. A fluctuating trend is conspicuous for the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
age
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group
 of 25 to 29, which stood at You use this word too often, consider replacing it withovereverywhereabout
around
 38%, climbed up to approximately 51% in 1986 and finally
 took a dip at You use this word too often, consider replacing it withovereverywhereabout
around
 41 per cent.

By contrast, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
age
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groups
 of 25-29 and 30-34 rose significantly
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from 38 and 8
 per cent to 49 and 29 per cent in the year 2006, respectively
. Meanwhile, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgirlwifedaughtermothershe
women
 who aged 40 or more climbed up at This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 5 per cent in the final year. 