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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing task 1

The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012. oqRq
The chart show the percentage of the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012. Moreover, the first quarter of the year in Urban areas shows a sharp increase which start from 2% to 4% of unemployment situation. Despite, the Rural areas a sharp decrease from 7% to 4. 5% of unemployment rate. However, in the second quarter the Rural areas represent a small grow about 1% and in Urban areas the grow had reduced sharply about 4%. Thirdly, in the third quarter, the diagram view a decrease in Rural areas and in the opposite the Urban areas view an increase. Lastly, in the fourth quarter, both areas became equal in the percentage of unemployment rate which is 5%. To sum up, we noticed from the chart that when the Urban areas increase the Rural areas decrease and when the Rural areas grow up the Urban areas percentage reduces.
The chart
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the percentage of the
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unemployment
situation in Australia in the year 2012.
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, the
first
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quarter
of the year in
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Urban
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areas
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shows
a sharp increase which
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start
from 2% to 4% of
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unemployment
situation. Despite, the
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Rural
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areas
a sharp decrease from 7% to 4. 5% of
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unemployment
rate.
However
, in the second
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quarter
the
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Rural
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areas
represent a
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small
grow about 1% and in
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Urban
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areas
the
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grow
had
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reduced
sharply
about 4%.
Thirdly
, in the third
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quarter
, the diagram view a decrease in
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Rural
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areas
and in the opposite the
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Urban
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areas
view an increase.
Lastly
, in the fourth
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quarter
, both
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areas
became equal in the percentage of
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unemployment
rate which is 5%. To sum up, we noticed from the chart that when the
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Urban
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areas
increase the
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Rural
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areas
decrease and when the
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Rural
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areas
grow up the
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Urban
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areas
percentage
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reduces
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IELTS academic The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012.

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
149 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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