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The plans below show information about a university sports court

The plans below show information about a university sports court NmGy2

The two maps illustrate the main development which has taken place in a university sports court, comparing 1990 with the present. Overall, it seems that a university sports court has modernised with new facilities to serve for students and lectures. The most striking thing is that a sport court is divided into two parts, including inside and outside now. In 1990, the big park and car park was located in the south-west and north-west of the court, but in present day, the former has been turned into the basketball court and the latter has been replaced by the tennis court which has been enlarged with two blocks. In the present, the walls have been built to cover the remaining facilities, which lead to the outdoor pool being converted into the indoor one. In the meantime, the changing room has been moved on the opposite of the indoor pool, which was built adjacent to the reception in 1990. The fitness centre is the place where was a tennis court formerly, and now it grows the space. Finally, the cafe and the reception remained at the same position throughout the period

The two maps illustrate the main development which has taken place in a university sports You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstreet
court
, comparing 1990 with the present.

Overall
, it seems that a university sports You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstreet
court
 has Possible spelling mistake. 'modernised' is British English.modernized
modernised
 with new facilities to serve for students and lectures. The most striking thing is that a sport You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstreet
court
is divided
 into two parts, including inside and outside This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
.

In 1990, the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 park and car park was located
 in the south-west and north-west of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstreet
court
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 in present day, the former has been turned
 into the basketball You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstreet
court
 and the latter has been replaced
 by the tennis You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstreet
court
 which has been enlarged
 with two blocks.

In the present, the walls have been built
 to cover the remaining facilities, which lead to the outdoor pool being converted
 into the indoor one. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
In
 the meantime, the changing room has been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 on the opposite of the indoor pool, which was built
 adjacent to the reception in 1990. The fitness Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 is the place where was a tennis You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstreet
court
formerly
, and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 it grows the space. Finally
, the 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
 and the reception remained at the same position throughout the period