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The chart shows various exports of one country in 2015 and 2016. It explains percentage values in both years and their earning.

The chart shows various exports of one country in 2015 and 2016. It explains percentage values in both years and their earning. p5kaL
Distinct Exports of a Country and changes in the years of 2015 and 2016 are defined in the chart. Moreover, The following paragraphs discuss Percentage changes and earnings of Petroleum Products, Engineered goods, Gems and Jewelry, Agricultural products, and Textiles. At First, when we check most money-making export Petroleum Products, The highest noted exports was in 2016 was more than 60 billion which was a 3% increase than 2015 in which it exports up to 60 billion. Later, if we observe Engineered goods, they are raised drastically more than 60 billion in 2016 which was up to 8. 5% more than in 2015 of 50 and 60 billion. Furthermore, Gems and Jewelry are a sudden decrease in 2016 which earn 40 billion was 5. 18% less compared to earnings of 40 and 50 billion in 2015. However, Agricultural products are between 30 and 40 identifies slightly risen in exports 0. 81% in 2016 than 2015. Consequently, there are especially higher exports in Textiles between 30 and 40 billion in 2016 comparing to 2015. In 2015 exports are between 20 and 30 billion in which it has 15. 24% more increment exporting in 2016. Overall, 2016 has Money making exports in all goods except for Gems and Jewelry. Also, It has the most profits comparing 2015 which shows raised of 31% in all exporting sectors.
Distinct
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Exports
of a Country and
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changes
in the years of 2015 and 2016
are defined
in the chart.
Moreover
, The following paragraphs discuss Percentage
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changes
and earnings of Petroleum
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Products
, Engineered
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goods
, Gems and Jewelry, Agricultural
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products
, and Textiles.

At
First
, when we
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check
most money-making
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export
Petroleum
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Products
, The highest noted
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exports
was in 2016 was more than 60
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billion
which was a 3% increase than 2015 in which it
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exports
up to 60
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billion
. Later, if we observe Engineered
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goods
, they
are raised
drastically
more than 60
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billion
in 2016 which was up to 8. 5% more than in 2015 of 50 and 60
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billion
.
Furthermore
, Gems and Jewelry are a sudden decrease in 2016 which earn 40
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billion
was 5. 18% less compared to earnings of 40 and 50
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billion
in 2015.

However
, Agricultural
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products
are between 30 and 40 identifies
slightly
risen in
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exports
0. 81% in 2016 than 2015.
Consequently
, there are
especially
higher
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exports
in Textiles between 30 and 40
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billion
in 2016 comparing to 2015. In 2015
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exports
are between 20 and 30
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billion
in which it has 15. 24% more increment exporting in 2016.

Overall
, 2016 has Money making
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exports
in all
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goods
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except for
Gems and Jewelry.
Also
, It has the most profits comparing 2015 which
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shows
raised of 31% in all exporting sectors.
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IELTS academic The chart shows various exports of one country in 2015 and 2016. It explains percentage values in both years and their earning.

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